So many questions...gone unanswered
solicited into my sensorium
digging like a worm enjoy the poop
disgusting...life is not an emporium
Mistakes I have made in my past
misinterpretation of marriage
misinformed caused me at last
miserably...like a mirage
Living with fear in every second
legalities doesn't imply so far
loving and caring that I pretend
loosely based on DO Re Mi Fa
Executing....life without true love
Encoded with...such a fake
Elude...as soon as possible
Save your soul for God's sake!!
Francesca Kanapathy "Loosely based on Do Re Mi Fa"....very nice Uncle!! Thank you for sharing your poetry!!!
ReplyDeleteSeptember 1, 2011 at 10:07pm · Unlike · 2.
Iyyappa Madhavan miserable i am also like a mirage. i feel like my poetry. i liked it
September 2, 2011 at 1:36am · Unlike · 1.
Mary Beulah Brilliancy Executing....life without true love
Encoded with...such a fake
Elude...as soon as possible
Save your soul for God's sake!!- nice lines sir thankyou for this lifefull poem
September 2, 2011 at 1:47am · Unlike · 1.
Vj Yogesh I have experienced something as you said in some lines. The poem portrays the reality of life.
September 2, 2011 at 4:22am · Unlike · 1.
Mayoo Mano //Living with fear in every second
legalities doesn't imply so far
loving and caring that I pretend
loosely based on DO Re Mi Fa//
A nice one Anand, thanks for sharing.
September 2, 2011 at 3:48pm · Unlike · 2.
Sudhakar Pandian nice....
September 2, 2011 at 10:45pm · Unlike · 1.
Lakshmi Chitoor Subramaniam Anand, thanks for the tag. As poetry it does not work but I can understand the depth of feelings. But more is needed for it to become poetry. How you can make that happen I don't know for I am not a poet and can't write poetry. But I do enjoy good poetry.
September 2, 2011 at 11:45pm · Unlike · 3.
Anne Stanislaus · 7 mutual friends
Verrryyyyy Nice!!!
September 3, 2011 at 6:53pm · Unlike · 1.