The way the mountains lying down
green nothing but.......everywhere
Wake up soon and wear your gown
Reach the summit I swear
You guys holding pine and cedar
Youth and strength altogether
Resistance never resists the weather
Typically..... as a human ladder
Where I am sitting
the sun ready to wrap
I assume it is around...
above twenty feet up
Falling down and changing color
To save the green and make it free
By the end of the day like a fortune teller
I witnessed this event through a grown up tree
green nothing but.......everywhere
Wake up soon and wear your gown
Reach the summit I swear
You guys holding pine and cedar
Youth and strength altogether
Resistance never resists the weather
Typically..... as a human ladder
Where I am sitting
the sun ready to wrap
I assume it is around...
above twenty feet up
Falling down and changing color
To save the green and make it free
By the end of the day like a fortune teller
I witnessed this event through a grown up tree
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ReplyDeleteThiru Thirukkumaran · 69 mutual friends
Resistance never resists the weather// I witnessed
September 19, 2011 at 8:21pm · Unlike · 3.
Vj Yogesh A great description... Your words invite the readers to summit through out the imagination.
September 19, 2011 at 8:38pm · Unlike · 2.
Lakshmi Chitoor Subramaniam Good description. Still not a poem I am afraid. This is because suddenly at places things descend into ordinariness. This is my view. Others may think differently.
September 19, 2011 at 10:01pm · Unlike · 1.
Gobinath Na தமிழில் அகவல் கவிதைகள் போல ஆங்கிலத்தில் ஓசை நயத்துடன் வரும் ராப் வகையான பாடல் வரிகள் போன்று அமைகின்றது கவிதை.
Resistance never resists the weather நல்லா இருக்கு.
http://youtu.be/fo24nzRMWnA
என்ற பாடல் ஒரு இலகுவான வார்த்தைகளின் கோர்வையாகவும் அழகாகவும் இருக்கிறது.
September 20, 2011 at 5:58am · Unlike · 1.
P A Jayakaran Arullingam u have good critics... Ambai!
September 20, 2011 at 11:04am · Unlike · 1.
P A Jayakaran Arullingam good spoken words
September 20, 2011 at 11:07am · Unlike · 1.
Vathiri C Raveendran அருமையாக உள்ளது.
September 20, 2011 at 11:28am · Unlike · 1.
Anand Prasad Thank you everyone for commenting.......Would like to comment on top of the layer......a good, bad and exclamative interpretation differs from the reader's perspective. Through these lines or poetry, whatever, I would like to portray my own struggle battling with my home land. It may sound like a rap or a crap...all depends on how you trap! Isn't this unfortunate that a writer happens to translate and demonstrate his works? Honestly convey your comments, don't be afraid what others would think.
September 21, 2011 at 10:16pm · Like · 2.
Priya Rasathurai Wow! Very nice! I love how your words wonder through imaginaion! You are so talented! Can't stop saying it! Amazing!
September 22, 2011 at 11:01am · Unlike · 1.