Staring at a burning coil
that chases off the mosquitoe
bitten by them and scratched my back
I don't want to be a Quasimodo
Oh........... dear little insect
taste....and suck all of my blood
overall the reminder ..... in fact
you are going to die with an overload
God creates us all equal
Don't ever try to impose a sequel
You are one among the creatures
Determined to defeat me.... is awful
All you can do to my skin look bad
Quite a strategy....oh it's so sad!!!
Since my childhood I've been through this all
It's just you...I'm not mad!!!!
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ReplyDeleteMayoo Mano """Oh........... dear little insect
taste....and suck all of my blood
overall the reminder ..... in fact
you are going to die with an overload""""
August 9, 2011 at 10:36pm · Unlike · 5.
Iyyappa Madhavan i feel the poetry sir.
August 10, 2011 at 7:49am · Unlike · 1.
Mamallan Karthi :)..
August 10, 2011 at 1:53pm · Unlike · 1.
Gobinath Na Dedicated to those Rioters of England.
August 11, 2011 at 4:27pm · Like.
Gobinath Na I just observed the cons of the poem matching the class conflict risen in England. The uncared underclass has shown off its significance in the society, just like the mosquitoes.
August 11, 2011 at 4:29pm · Like · 1.
Gobinath Na Dear Mr Poet, regardless to England's riots or any political scenarios; your poem shows and contains a great deal of acceptance and tolerance, for what we fought, fighting and desperate for. Thanks for the share.
August 11, 2011 at 4:35pm · Like · 1.
Gobinath Na You will fight back like the Prime Minister did at some point.
August 11, 2011 at 4:58pm · Like.
Anand Prasad @Gobi: I wrote this poetry on July 10th, 2011 while I was vacationing in the woods of Eastern Quebec. It's quite interesting how you interpreted !?! I was in fact severely bitten by mosquitoes!
"You will fight back like the Prime Minister did at some point" ...
What was that comment anyway?...
I really don't get your point!
"Thanks for the share".....
You are welcome!!!
August 11, 2011 at 10:41pm · Like · 1.
Gobinath Na Thanks Mr Prasad. The police in London did not attack the rioters until they received the order from the Prime minister to 'fight back' to stop the riots. This is too specific for you to follow and be updated with from a different state.
However, this poetry is one of your best ones.
August 12, 2011 at 2:58am · Unlike · 2.